Free Writing

My guy Conner Thomas Robert O'Malley Jesko Langler Becker Franklin Jr. Saint Wenzel Greenwood Donnelley, loves to work with guns and he makes a lot of money while doing it. He is based off of random people in Ms. Langler's Language Arts class. The reason why his name is so long is because I want him to be non-normal. He lives in a giant house and owns a lot of land.

Character's Talking

Conner: Hey Mike. How are you doing.
Mike: Good. Just figuring out new ideas.
Conner: O
Conner: Cool
Conner: What do you have on your mind.
Mike: I want a gun to have a scope on it so you can shoot from long range.
Conner: That's a good idea Mike!
Mike: Thanks Conner.
Conner: What are you going to do to make that happen.
Mike: BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
Conner: Are you sure that's going to work.
Mike: I don't know but I'm going to try it out.
Conner: OK. Good luck.
Mike: Thanks

Upfront

There where really no topics about the gun and artillery in the pages. I couldn't really use the pages for my essay to right about.

Character

My guy is worried that his newest gun will not be done before the South reaches the base. He fears that he will have to leave the base and build the gun some where else. He is scaried that the south will win the war. It makes them happy when my guy will make his gun and hit the south hard.

Story

I want to have a guy named Conner Thomas Robert O'Malley Jesko Langler Becker Franklin Jr. Saint Wenzel Greenwood Donnelley. He is going to be fighting in the civil war. He fought for the north, freeing the slaves down south. He will help fight plus he has a loved one that is a slave that he has to save down south. He helped create weapons and artillery for the army. He was the one who created the first muzzle load. He was famous and he created so many powerful canoes and guns.

Writing

I think people are motivated by money for there family, and love. Some people think that they are first because they are richer or lives in a house then comes the second people who don't have money and a house. I think that some people are really shellfish. I wanted a new playstation but my dad wouldn't buy it. I started to do stuff around the house and around town to pay for half of it and my dad payed the rest.

Fighting

When someone is making fun of someone who you love, you get really angry and you don't wanted them to do that. If it's someone you love and know, I think that you should be able to fight. I always live under my dads rule, "If you win I won't be angry." You can use verbal words to start a fight without flying punches going past your face. Someone could disagree with someone and they can get a fended or doesn't like what there saying. You could fight because someone was hurting the one you love. A matter of life or death. For money and fame. For you opinion on what someone said.